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2021年1月16日雅思大作文分析+范文(21年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2021.01.16雅思大作文原题

Students leave high school without learning a way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions to this issue?

今日雅思写作预测命中情况

  • 1月16日小作文流程图命中
  • 1月16日大作文教育类命中

  • 1月9日小作文柱图命中
  • 1月9日大作文全球化类别命中

金长麟大作文解析

雅思中国大陆考区最近从2020年10月起呈现了一种新的趋势:仍旧常规依照一定顺序出现各类话题,比如1月-3月是教育类高频考察季度,在这个期间教育题型多发,今天就是命中了类别。

但是雅思不再只从大陆之前的题库里出题,而是从北美和欧洲的卷子里找题目。比如今天的理财教育就是大陆近几年没有考过的。这无疑既增加了备考难度,因为欧美的教育体系和中国大陆不同,有些题目中国大陆考生的确觉得陌生,同时也增加了预测难度,今天就是命中了题型范围但没有命中原题!

这个题目还不算太难。

大家一定能想到的主要原因有两个:

一、学校太关注学科教育,没有教授相关技能;二、家庭教育中有关理财技能的教授缺乏或滞后。

写作难点在于怎么拓展这两个点。学校部分要写原因,比如为什么重视学科而轻视社会技能。家庭部分可以采取分类写法,比如什么样的家庭会有这一类问题。

解决方法就按照原因来分析,学校一定是加强教育体系和课程,邀请专业人士来开讲。家庭则是增强意识。但两者对比还是要依赖学校。

偏锋参考范文

(来自网络,可借鉴观点论证不能使用原文段落)

There is a common problem among high school graduates these days when students leave school without any knowledge or skill in personal money management. This essay will outline several reasons for this trend and some possible solutions to help tackle the issue.

Firstly, one of the leading causes of this problem is that the majority of high school students live with their parents and are entirely financially dependent upon them. Most students do not need to work to earn money while at high school, as their parents pay for all their needs, and therefore do not gain any understanding about the realities of earning and saving money. Usually, the only money that students receive is from their parents, and this is typically in the form of pocket-money, which is given with the intent of it being spent. Therefore, young people only really learn how to spend money, and not how to earn, save, or manage it wisely.

However, there are a number of viable solutions to help students deal with this problem. Firstly, necessary money management skills could be included as a compulsory subject for students in their high school years, which would help equip them with the knowledge and skills to manage their finances when they leave school, move out of home, and enter employment.

The second possible step that could be taken to help curb this problem is through education at home. Parents need to take responsibility to make sure that their children are adequately educated in such matters to ensure their children maintain a successful and independent financial situation after graduating and leaving home.

In conclusion, although money management is a problem for many school leavers, there are a number of viable solutions to counteract this problem.

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