2021.1.21雅思大作文原题
A recent survey shows that in many countries across the world people are generally living longer. But an increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for the society as a whole. What are the possible effects of a longer life expectancy on individuals and the society?
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- 1月21日小作文饼图，大作文社会类命中
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- 1月9日小作文柱图命中，大作文全球化类别命中
金长麟大作文解析
这是一个社会类的老题，并且是被雅思收录在官方OG里的题目。本周社会类我是特别预警的，预测题库社会类的第十题就是在分析老人在现代社会的种种问题，命中！
这个题目的核心词是implications，这个词普遍认知是含义和暗指，但在本题中根据柯林斯字典应该理解为后果、结果。 （柯林斯字典例句：The implications of something are the things that are likely to happen as a result. 可能的结果）这样的用词给今天的考生带来了理解的难度。
其次要注意，本题不仅仅问对个人的好坏，还问了对社会的影响，无论利弊都必须有一个段落来回答这一问，不然就是没有涵盖题目所有问题。
个人的利弊不推荐直来直往地从活得长好和活得长不好来答，这样答容易出现自相矛盾的观点逻辑，如果考生的逻辑论述能力不足的话。可以从分类的角度来看究竟是什么人。
富足、健康的人在享受长的生命，贫穷、不健康的人在忍受长的生命。对于社会的我们可以继续使用分类+推断结果的演绎写法：在很多出生率低下的社会和国家中，生命延长无疑带来老龄化问题从而引发一系列社会和经济问题。
Aging Population Problems:
- The effects of people living longer have both social and economic impacts.
- Extended families are having to combine households to accommodate aging parents.
- Not all families can afford to provide for their elderly loved ones. They’re strained financially and emotionally.
- As the aging population increases, the more demand there is for healthcare. Older people are more likely to need frequent medical treatment.
- Older people are less able to perform physically-demanding jobs or to work full-time. This could have a devastating impact on job markets.
- Many older people don’t have enough money to live for a longer period of time on retirement incomes. They are likely to run out of money just as they need more care.
- There are also concerns about the legal and social rights of the elderly as their numbers increase. There is the potential for some populations to treat their elderly members unfairly or with less dignity than they deserve.
活得长对社会的反映和意义：
- The extension of life expectancy motivates social progress as it shows that a country has established a strong medical care system to protect citizens from life-threatening illnesses.
- Ageing population is dragging a country s economy, as the soaring number of senior citizens requires more social resources. For example, they do not create social wealth but bring challenges to national Medicare system.
偏锋参考范文
（可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用原段落）
Average life expectancy has indeed increased significantly because of the advances made in the field of medical science. In my opinion, this is generally a positive development for certain groups of people; however, it also means that more resources are required to take care of the elderly.
Longer life expectancy can be damaging to society and families to a certain degree. This is because longer life expectancy does not necessarily mean that a person will remain healthy throughout their life. Older people need medical, and nursing care more frequently. They have a greater number of sick days per year, which means societies need more doctors, nursing staff, healthcare facilities, and home care facilities to care for their aging population. When it comes to an individual family, even if old people are still fit, they may not look after themselves. They may have to live with their children or be cared for in a home, which can be expensive. Elderly people do not like to be a burden, but their children can feel obliged to care for them.
Despite the above disadvantages of living longer, increasing life expectancy also has many advantages to individuals, their families, and the government. Firstly, not all old people become ill. Those who remain healthy can enjoy a happy old age as long as they have saved enough money. Such people can live longer with their family to enjoy the family's warmth and have time to enjoy their retirement to do a range of activities that they could not do when they were at work, like traveling to various places. They can also help look after their grandchildren, which is a great benefit for working parents. Their consumption can contribute more to society as well.
In conclusion, while increased lifespan has brought about many problems, in my view, the advantages of this development cannot be ignored.
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