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2020年12月12日雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

雅思写作12月预测命中情况

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2020.12.12雅思大作文原题

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

金长麟(20年雅思写作名师)雅思大作文解析

这是一个欧洲卷的老题,在G类中的变体考察是问名人赚很多钱对不对以及名人对年轻人的影响。

首先这不是一个要求讨论双方的题目,我们可以选择同意炫富而不是通过努力才华成名的人对年轻人的确有负面影响。

先来看一下名人对年轻人的影响:

Famous people such as movie or sports stars can be a role model for the young people of a society. Idealizing and treating them as their idol can help them to achieve their required goal in life. Following their footprints can result in exploring their own talent which can further showcase marvels and brilliance. Their creativity, innovation and display of their skills and abilities inspire adolescents to bring change in their life for good.

偏锋参考范文

(来自网络,可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用范文原段)

It is true that some celebrities are known for their glamourous lifestyles rather than for the work they do. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example for children, I believe that other famous people act as positive role models.

On the one hand, many people do achieve fame without really working for it. They may have inherited money from parents, married a famous or wealthy person, or they may have appeared in gossip magazines or on a reality TV program. A good example would be Paris Hilton, who is rich and famous for the wrong reasons. She spends her time attending parties and nightclubs, and her behaviour promotes the idea that appearance, glamour and media profile are more important than hard work and good character. The message to young people is that success can be achieved easily, and that school work is not necessary.

On the other hand, there are at least as many celebrities whose accomplishments make them excellent role models for young people. Actors, musicians and sports stars become famous idols because they have worked hard and applied themselves to develop real skills and abilities. They demonstrate great effort, determination and ambition, which is required for someone who wants to be truly successful in their chosen field. An example is the actor and martial artist Jackie Chan, who has become world famous through years of practice and hard work. This kind of self-made celebrity can inspire children to develop their talents through application and perseverance.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the influence of celebrities on young people can be positive as well as negative.

01 【金老师作文命中率】

金老师雅思教学20年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了

每一场雅思考试,金长麟都会为同学们做的写作预测,不是市面上其他老师给你的大范围的预测,我们的预测题库一般在5个左右!!!

 

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