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2020.9.12雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2020.9.12雅思大作文原题

People still value artists in the age of advanced science and technology. Write about the things that the art can tell us but the science cannot.

【金长麟解析】

今天的题目是2016年7月14雅思真题的变体。

当时的题目是:

People still value artists in the age of advanced science and technology. Why you think this is? Are arts as important as science and technology?

今天的题目看似没有考后面的两个问题,但是仔细分析人们在科技发达的今天还是注重艺术的原因不就是艺术能做到科技做不到的嘛。

同时由于艺术能做到科技做不到的,所以艺术和科技对社会同样重要。

所以这个题目本质还是在考两个点:艺术的作用和对社会的重要性,以及艺术的特有优势(与科技带来的优势对比)

  • 艺术作用常见观点和素材

l The essence of arts is its natural outflow of human emotion and their perception to the world from a subjective and self-oriented perspective, which can arouse a mental echo of the thirst for beauty and the probation of the primitive state of mind.

l The importance of art cannot be underestimated for the simple reason that its benefits will make a difference to human, albeit the dominance of technology.

l The circumstance that the penetration of technological devices drains energy and paralyses our sense to the beauty of world is likely to be eased because art can present the aesthetic bliss and therefore reduce the fatigue and tiresome.

【参考范文】

范文来自网络仅可参考观点和段落行文方式

In the current digital era, there is a phenomenon that artists are still respected by the public. This essay may examine the reasons for it and personally speaking, arts may not be less important than science and technology.

Initially, artists have made their painstaking efforts in their domains, which deserves respect from others. It is acknowledged that scientists may spend a lot of time and energy to develop their technological products. Similarly, it also takes musicians and painters a large amount of time and energy to compose a song or draw a satisfactory picture. Thus, having devoted to a specific career, artists should be respected as well.

Furthermore, artists may be gifted in expressing emotions while scientists may not be talented in it. It is common that a song could either bring about joy and happiness to human beings or reflect people’s sadness under some conditions. Compared with arts, technology and science could provide individuals with convenience, but they may not illustrate emotions of human beings so vividly. Thus, the public still show their respect since some artistic products could echo their feelings.

From my own perspective, arts are as important as modern technology and science because of some unique functions. For most scientists, what they pursue may be a higher efficiency and accomplishing tasks in a shorter time. However, the existence of arts may allow people to enjoy their life at a slower pace. For example, spending a whole day on drawing a picture may be wasteful for some scientist, but painters could have a sense of achievement through such an activity. Thus, there is a need for emphasizing arts since arts could allow people to gain satisfaction as well.

In sum, individuals maintain their respect towards artists since artists devote themselves to careers, they like and their products could demonstrate emotions of human beings better than technologies do. In my opinion, arts are also crucial for people could also obtain fulfillment through artistic activities.

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