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2020.8.29雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2020.8.29雅思大作文原题

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【金长麟解析】

今天的题目再一次是老题重现,201816号亚太区的原题。只是没有想到,在8月份的最后一场会考到运动类运动类,每年当中考察的概率其实还是挺低的,基本上一个季度可能会出现一次,或者几个季度出现一次。

今天这个题目要求讨论,双方其实即使不要求讨论,双方也基本会写成中立,因为最核心的观点是不同的运动项目起目的和给参加运动者带来的收益是不同的。

毫无疑问,团队运动在能够让人充分得到运动之外,可以培养团队精神,可以培养合作意识,可以培养交流能力,而且很多团队运动,它培养了集体的荣誉感,并且知道在整个团队当中每个人应该承担什么样的角色,这些都是个人运动在完成体能训练以外,所不能够得到的优势。

但是个人运动我们就会用到一些单词,比如说游泳,比如跑步是有氧运动,这种情况的运动可以帮助锻炼体能,恢复心肺功能,让人变得更健康,较好的控制血压,较好的控制身体的各种方面,然后可以减少患病风险。

甚至于还可以从不同的年龄来说,比如老人比如孩子,所以这个题目其实在今天尽管不在常规的推断范围内,但总体真的不算是一个难题。

【参考范文】

可以借鉴观点和论证逻辑,不能使用原段落

There are conflicting views regarding whether playing sports alone or with others will provide us more benefits. Both sides of this argument will be discussed in this essay, followed by my own opinion.

For those who think that individual sports have more benefits, they may have following reasons. Firstly, compared to team sports which request all team members to meet at a specific time to train or compete, individual sports are more convenient. This is because individuals can decide when to play the sport based on their own needs, avoiding being restricted by a fixed timetable. What is more, while we are playing sports alone,there is minimum distraction, which can enhance our concentration on practicing sports skills, whereas if we play with others, different personalities, habits may lead to misunderstandings and conflicts, preventing us from fully enjoying the sport.

 

However, for people who think that team sports are better, they may also have reasonable justifications. Obviously, team members can learn about each others’ strengths which not only include performance skills but also include positive attitudes such as determination and perseverance. Furthermore, in team sports, participants have lots of chances to interact with each other, practicing important social skills like listening empathetically, resolving disputes, expressing their ideas clearly. All of these skills can be translated into interpersonal skills, help ing them build connections with others, contributing to a greater sense of belonging.

In my opinion, which type of sports brings us more benefits depends on individuals’ needs. For those who wants to minimise distraction in sports, individual ones are more suitable for them, whereas for those who are keen on improving their social and sports skills, team sports would be a better choice.

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