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2021年3月27日雅思大作文分析+范文(21年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2021.3.27雅思大作文原题

Some people are reducing their walks; however, many health experts say that walking is the best exercise to maintain health. Why do people walk less? What might encourage people to walk longer distances?

 

3月雅思写作预测命中情况

  • 3月27日小作文柱图命中,大作文运动类

  • 3月20日小作文地图题,大作文犯罪类命中
  • 3月13日小作文线图命中,大作文3号直播课原题
  • 3月6日小作文柱图命中,大作文两性类,预测原题命中
  • 3月4日小作文表格命中,大作文环境类(上周讲解原题)

金长麟大作文解析

今天的题目稍稍不太常见,运动类别,国民健康讨论。这种题目常见的考察是政府政策和健康关联问题,比如:是否政府投资建造更多的体育设施,就能提高国民健康?以及:政府是否应该阻止危险运动?和政府是否应该给人们的健康生活指导和建议?等等

另外今天又是说明文的考察,2月中上旬的时候在我的直播当中专门做了说明文写法的讲解,而且1月底2月底3月底的三场考试都在考察说明文,加上3月6号的补充考察,三个月来已经有4次说明文的考察了。这个文体4月的考生还是建议要复习。

形成减少步行的原因也可以归结到减少常规运动的原因:比如生活节奏的加快和工作量的增加。当然也有运动意识相关的问题和运动设施建设不足的因素。科技的发展提供了很多运动选择也改变了人们的生活方式,这也是导致题目讨论问题的原因之一。

1. Many people claim that they do not have time for walking or exercising anymore.

2. Some people blame the public facilities such as pathways in a city.

3. The primary reason also can be the lack of awareness about the advantages of walking regularly among common people.

4. The sedentary lifestyle and technological development are also influencing people to walk less.

这种文体统一的解决办法一般都是依靠政府,主要有三种形式:

  • 政府立法管制
  • 政府投资建设
  • 政府教育引导

1. Some necessary health policies from the government need to be released to encourage people, and all health organizations and hospitals should apply those policies to stimulate people to change their habits.

2. The introduction of the benefit of walking by charity ads helps to promote exercise and walking.

3. Offering convenient facilities such as safe sidewalks or parks can also persuade people to go out for a walk.

 

偏锋参考范文

(可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用原段落)

Since ancient times, the fundamental principle to remain fit and live a healthy life is in doing physical exercises regularly. These exercises not only help in attaining a good physique but also improves the metabolism and blood circulation in the body. According to health professionals, daily strolling has a great value in maintaining health, but for the past few years, few people have either reduced their walk or quit it completely. This essay will analyze what lead to this cause and what factors can encourage people to increase their walking yards.

People are walking less due to many reasons, but primarily it is due to the availability of abundant transport, either public or private. They believe that by using transportation, they can save valuable time. Weather also plays a significant role, and people find it really hard to walk in hot, humid, and extreme cold climatic conditions. Moreover, they say that due to the increased rate of street crimes, they have either shortened their walk or quit it completely. Furthermore, people now have access to fitness centers where they can use different equipment and machinery to walk or jog. For them walking alone on the streets without a partner is a boring activity.

In order to encourage and motivate people to walk more, one can make walking tracks covered with shades to reduce heat. Walking tracks should be made more beautiful by improving the landscape of the parks such that one should feel refreshing. Advertisement boards should be in place, and different activities should be planned to make walking a splendid experience. The government should also hold health awareness programs and should emphasize the importance of walk.

To recapitulate, the aforementioned highlights different factors resulting in reduced walk and suggested few recommendations on how things can be improved. It is medically proven that walking is a very good exercise to acquire the right balance in body structure, and one should do it regularly.

 

01 【金老师作文命中率】

金老师雅思教学21年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了

 

 

 

 

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