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2021年3月4日雅思大作文分析+范文(21年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2021.3.4雅思大作文原题

There are more animals in danger of extinction. Some people say that only the animals that are useful to humans should be protected. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

3月4日雅思写作预测命中情况:小作文命中

  • 3月4日小作文表格命中,大作文环境类(上周讲解原题)

  • 2月27日小作文柱图表格组合命中,大作文环境类命中
  • 2月25日小作文地图题,大作文教育类,没有命中
  • 2月20日小作文表格命中,大作文教育类没有命中
  • 2月6日小作文柱图,大作文全球化,没有命中
  • 1月30日小作文柱图表格组合命中,大作文环境类命中
  • 1月23日小作文地图,大作文教育类,没有命中
  • 1月21日小作文饼图,大作文社会类命中
  • 1月16日小作文流程图命中,大作文教育类命中
  • 1月9日小作文柱图命中,大作文全球化类别命中

金长麟大作文解析

延续上周2.27的类型在3月第一场加试中继续考察环境保护类别,这的确没有预测到。

但是这不是今年第一次在周四加试中出现和上周刚刚考察的类别相似或一致的情况。

此外本周的这个题目是我上周预测课上讲解分析的几乎原题,所以我一直强调除了从考场当周进到金老师公益屠鸭群的同学外,一直在群里的同学抽空尽量多听预测课,这样概率更多更精准!

这个题目不难,动物保护里的老题变体。一般是讨论动物是否应该保护,但我们记住只要是问动物保护就必须是应该,因为动物和人类相互依存。

这个题目的第一句是题干,不用过多描写,主要是回答第二个问题:Some people say that only the animals that are useful to human should be protected. 这个句子里有only就一定不同意。加上题目的最后是To what extent do you agree or disagree?

于是可以选择一边倒结构,完全不同意,所有动物都应该保护,这是生态平衡的必须。还可以写保护动物的重要性和作用!

常见观点:

  • The most important reason for saving all animals is that they are part of our ecosystem. Every species of wildlife plays a role in maintaining the balance of life on Earth. Thus, the loss of any species can affect us directly or indirectly.
  • Furthermore, wild animals have aesthetic appeal. They are beautiful creatures of nature and are a part of our bio-diversity.

偏锋参考范文

(可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用原段落)

Nowadays, the number of endangered species has reached an alarming stage. While some people think humans should only protect animals useful to us, I completely disagree with this idea. I believe we should try to preserve all species, even if some people think they are not useful. This essay will present arguments to support my opinion.

First, I believe a large number of animals which is in danger of extinction are due to human activity. For example, deforestation and intentional burnings are two of the main factors that made dozens of species disappear. Therefore, there is nothing fairer than protect those animals that we put in this situation, whether or not they are useful to humans.

 

Furthermore, we may think that some species are not useful nowadays, but we cannot predict the future, and some species that we classify as unuseful, will probably be in the future.

 

Second, every animal has a vital role in the environment. In other words, every single species is essential to maintain the animal kingdom balanced. For example, the extinction of one single animal can lead to severe troubles for others. This is because every animal has a position in the animal net; while some are prey, others are predators. If one of them disappears, the whole system may be in danger.

To sum up, I believe humans should be worried about protecting all kinds of animals because they are essential to the environment, and some of them are endangered due to human activity.

01 【金老师作文命中率】

金老师雅思教学21年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了

每一场雅思考试,金长麟都会为同学们做精准的写作预测,注意,是精准的写作预测,不是市面上其他老师给你的大范围的预测,我们的预测题库一般在5个左右!!!

 

 

 

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