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2021年2月27日雅思大作文分析+范文(21年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2021.2.27雅思大作文原题

Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

最近雅思写作预测命中情况

  • 2月25日小作文地图题,大作文教育类,没有命中
  • 2月20日小作文表格命中,大作文教育类没有命中
  • 2月6日小作文柱图,大作文全球化,没有命中
  • 1月30日小作文柱图表格组合命中,大作文环境类命中
  • 1月23日小作文地图,大作文教育类,没有命中
  • 1月21日小作文饼图,大作文社会类命中
  • 1月16日小作文流程图命中,大作文教育类命中
  • 1月9日小作文柱图命中,大作文全球化类别命中

金长麟大作文解析

本周环境类如我预测课提醒的情况如期考察!这是2021年第二次考察环境类别(上次是1.30号的塑料危害)。同时今天题目是说明文,在2.2号直播课上我专项讲解了说明文的写法,并提醒了只要问政府如何解决就是立法、投资、教育三个统一方面。今天全部用上!

今天题目是环境类的老题。在中国大陆考区一般是考察:

1. What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity of water resources? You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

2. Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

而今天的这个题目是欧洲卷出现的过问法。最近中国大陆的雅思写作时长出现欧洲和亚太题库的老题大家要注意复习,一定要关注我的预测题库和预测直播!

尽管题目形式和大陆常见的不用,但解题思路差不多。水资源缺乏的主要原因是人口的迅速增长以及地表水和地下水的污染在加剧。另一个原因就是工农业的迅速发展。这不仅仅大量使用水也污染水。

解决这个问题的办法从政府层面是立法限制和阻止水污染,合理分配管理水资源。投资开发更多水资源,如:开发地下水和海水淡化,建立现代灌溉体系,增加污水循环利用的工厂。建造更多的大坝也是一个有效的解决办法。同时也需要国际合作。个人角度,通过政府的宣传引导,每个人要建立环保意识,明白水资源的紧缺并节约用水。

偏锋参考范文

(可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用原段落)

It is undeniable that water scarcity is becoming a global problem. Population growth is the main reason for this alarming trend, but some measures could be taken to tackle this predicament.

On the one hand, the growing population's pressure on water resources could lead to a shortage of them. An increasing number of populations lead to increased water demand in three sectors: Agriculture, Industry, and households. From an agricultural perspective, irrigation consumes a large amount of water. Also, the Agricultural industry could pollute the rest of the water with chemical compounds used in farming, like pesticides. Moreover, the industries and factories use a tremendous amount of water in their process. For instance, some research revealed that the meat processing industry could be the leading cause of water shortage in some UK regions. Finally, water used for household purposes could be another consequence of population growth and could ultimately lead to water demand.

There are two main solutions to solve the problems described above. One solution is that water recycling could play an essential role in water conservation. Governments should build new water pipes systems for recycling and should encourage people to use recycled water. Another solution is to remove salts from seawater to enable people to use them. This process is called desalination. It is now used in many countries like the USA and achieved its goal. Simultaneously, through charity ads from the government, individuals should also be aware of the seriousness of this issue to stop their wrong behaviors of wasting and polluting water resources.

In conclusion, water demand is a global problem caused mainly by the growth of population numbers and governments, and people should be cooperated to solve this issue.

 

01 【金老师作文命中率】

金老师雅思教学21年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了

 

 

 

 

2021年以后的每一天,我们将继续以身作则,不停进步,服务好每个考生。2021年以后的每一天,我们将继续以身作则,不停进步,服务好每个考生。

校长金长麟老师从事雅思教学二十年,四科主讲老师相加超过三十年教龄,均海外名校归国;并长期奋战在雅思教学一线。而且偏锋的老师会密集参加考试,总结考试规律,实时更新教材题库,为你备考铺路前行!助力你考取理想成绩!

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