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2021年2月25日雅思大作文分析+范文(21年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2021.2.25雅思大作文原题

Some people believe educational qualifications always bring success. Others think educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

最近雅思写作预测命中情况

  • 2月25日小作文地图题,大作文教育类,没有命中
  • 2月20日小作文表格命中,大作文教育类没有命中
  • 2月6日小作文柱图,大作文全球化,没有命中
  • 1月30日小作文柱图表格组合命中,大作文环境类命中
  • 1月23日小作文地图,大作文教育类,没有命中
  • 1月21日小作文饼图,大作文社会类命中
  • 1月16日小作文流程图命中,大作文教育类命中
  • 1月9日小作文柱图命中,大作文全球化类别命中

金长麟大作文解析

2021年1月份的雅思考试考了两次教育类的题目,而2月20号和25号又连续出现了两次教育类别的讨论。

尽管在之前做第一季度预测题库的时候,我就已经多次强调教育类别是第1季度最热点的题型,没有想到居然在一二月份考察的这么频繁,尤其是上一周到这一周两次连续考察,的确有一点始料未及。

今天的这个题目是教育类别里面常见的母题:有关于学校教育功能讨论的变体。

首先这个题目的最后要求,讨论双方并给出考生自己的观点,也就是我们只能在中立或者倾向两个立场当中选择一个,同时也必须要兼顾到两方的想法:

从正方的角度来看,我们要回答的是为什么有些人相信教育资质能够带来成功,这个相对比较容易回答。

首先从学习的角度来看,教育资质是对一个学习过程的肯定认可,同时也完备的体现了在这个学习过程当中拥有资质的人,他究竟获得了什么样的技能,这样使他更容易的被社会普遍接受。

其次,从社会的角度,我们也可以顺着分析说,正是因为有了这样的教育资质,雇佣者才会清楚地快速地判别求职者是否满足职位的需求。这是分类描述,又可以说到在很多特定领域的工作当中,是必须要有一定教育资质证书或者特定技能才能够获得成功的。但是正方解题的时候,一定要注意到always这个题眼。

For the most part, the more schooling one person can receive, the more successful one person will be in the chosen path. In general, people who drop out or receive minimal education are probably headed toward a long, torturous career slinging burger at a fast-food joint. That's a common perception, at least.

写反方观点时,可能有很多考生容易去定位到:“不一定会带来成功”这个中间的否定词,其实更好的写法我们可以定义的是成功,可以有三个层面:

第一、 如果只是在讨论职业的成功,认为在社会职业当中的认可是成功,教育当然会起到非常大的作用,教育资质也是现代化社会普遍所需要的。尽管如此,不是所有的职业获得成功都需要教育资质的。对于需要经验体力和从社会以及从资深的工作人员那里获得技能就能成功的职业,对于教育的资质需求就相对来讲没有那么高。

第二、 在职业成功的范围当中,也有太多并没有良好的较高的教育水平,甚至于没有获得相应的教育资质的人,却有着令人惊讶的职业成功比如比尔盖茨,乔布斯这样的人比比皆是。正是因为他们独特的思考、眼界、智慧使他们成功,而不一定是教育和教育资质在起作用。

第三、 如果我们定义成功并不是职业的成功,而是人生的成功,比如生活幸福或者在某些自己兴趣的领域获得一定成就,以及在社会当中获得一定成就和社会的认可,那就有可能和教育资质没有什么关系。我们经常在社会新闻当中听到有捡垃圾的老人供养了很多无法负担学业的学生完成学业,那么捐助者对社会的意义就是人生的一种成功,而这和他们接受过什么样的教育水平并没有关联。

Despite the importance of education and educational qualifications we talked about above, there is no denying that there are some successful people who stand as exceptions to the rule. There have been many great thinkers of the late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries, and some of them have done incredible things without ever having finished college. Steve Jobs, the co-founder of Apple, is one of the best examples, who is the most influential technological mind of the past century. Therefore, we dare conclude that there is no inevitable relation between educational qualifications and success.

偏锋参考范文

(可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用原段落)

Some people find academic degrees or other training essential milestones for future success. In contrast, others believe that this does not guarantee future success, and there are other relevant factors just as crucial. I take the opinion that success is not guaranteed.

On the one hand, gaining educational qualifications is certainly a method with which to gain success in certain areas of life. Regarding a career, it makes a person more competitive as employers will generally seek people who are well-qualified for the best and most richly rewarded positions in their company. This is true for all types of work, be it as an accountant or lawyer or work in the building trade. It can also be viewed as bringing success in terms of one's own development, as for some people gaining more educational qualifications is not for work but instead leads to a sense of personal accomplishment and fulfillment.

On the other hand, it is not certain that success will follow. Many people study hard to become well-qualified in terms of work but then fail to reach the heights of success that they expected. This is because there is a high level of competition for many jobs in today's world and a high number of graduates or qualified people. Not only this, there are other skills needed aside from qualifications. 'People skills' are also critical, and so regardless of the level of qualifications, those who cannot get along well with others may be less likely to achieve the success they desire.

In my opinion, therefore, educational qualifications can bring success in life for many people, yet there are no guarantees this will be the case. Other factors such as the current job market and personal skills are also factors of importance.

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