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2021年2月6日雅思大作文分析+范文（21年雅思名师金长麟分析）

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2021.2.6雅思大作文原题

More and more plastic waste polluting world’s cities, countrysides, oceans .How dose it cause? And find ways to solve the problem.

最近雅思写作预测命中情况

2月6日小作文柱图，大作文全球化，没有命中
1月30日小作文柱图表格组合命中，大作文环境类命中

1月23日小作文地图，大作文教育类，没有命中
1月21日小作文饼图，大作文社会类命中
1月16日小作文流程图命中，大作文教育类命中

1月9日小作文柱图命中，大作文全球化类别命中

金长麟大作文解析

2012年10月20号的老题重现。之前讲解全球化问题的时候，这个题目是必讲母题，这个题目不算难。

全球化的优缺点是统一的。优点一是国际旅游会带来全球的文化交流而带动全球文化一体化，这有助于消除误解和对峙。优点二是国际旅游一定是绿色的、无能源大量消耗的产业，可以促进destination国家的经济发展。

但反面来看，国际旅行会带来文化侵略和同化，而且过度开发国际旅游也会导致环境问题和自然资源的消耗。当然与时俱进的话，还可以写到国际旅行的发展有可能导致病毒在全球范围内更快速地传播。同时也有考官站在国际旅游实际情况提出，国际旅游的兴旺可能加剧交通工具的使用而带来更多污染。而且一些来自发达国家的旅行者把在本国已经禁止的一些不良文化带到了发展中国家的旅游地，导致了一系列当地的社会问题。

国际旅游带来的常见问题

International tourism also creates pollutions as well as causes damage to certain attractions. For one thing, the fossil fuel consumed during the journey and the pollutants left behind by the tourists pose a grave threat to the local environment and the ecosystem.

The influx of international tourists does not merely bring the host countries economic prosperity but also brings harmful cultural defects. Specific illegal actions, such as prostitution and alcoholism, and substance abuse, which probably have been banned in developed countries, are brought to destination countries in developing areas to satisfy the needs of these holidaymakers. And all of these render originally peaceful and pure countries to be a place with crime and instability.

国际旅游带来的文化交流和国际和平

International tourism contributes to the understanding between people from different cultures, religions, races, and political ideas. This is because tourism per se is more than appreciating the beautiful, brilliant natural landscapes, cultural traditions, or exciting customs. It is a kind of contact. To contact is to communicate. Communication naturally promotes understanding.

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Never before was traveling to alien countries so convenient and widespread as in this century. This phenomenon is partially attributed to improved technology and cheap flight tickets. Facing this travel frenzy, some are concerned that it will bring about too many side effects, while others insist that it should be supported and maintained. I reckon this development generally benefits this globalized world, though certain drawbacks should be tackled well.

Admittedly, cross-border travel has more downsides than one.

Firstly, the carbon dioxide planes emitted is reported to be disproportionately more than that emitted by other transportation means. The carbon dioxide will lead to the thin ozone layer, thereby increasing the probability of people contracting skin cancer.

Moreover, being easier and more convenient to travel among countries means that some criminals could flee to other countries after committing a hideous crime. This will pose a threat to local security and community stability.

However, the downsides cannot overshadow the upsides.

For starters, traveling worldwide with more ease could expand individuals’ horizons and stimulate their love of life, and they will be more productive at work in the future.

Besides, companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before. As a result, they could locate a potential target market and sell goods there or buy materials from there if the price is competitively enough. If a company could flourish this way, employees will benefit, and the society in which companies are operating will be more stable and harmonious.

Last but not least, if more and more people are afforded opportunities to go to other countries, there will be less misunderstanding and more respect among nations. All these will contribute to a diverse but harmonious culture.

To sum up, despite the numerous drawbacks mentioned above, traveling to other countries with more convenience and ease is also a positive development.