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2021年1月23日雅思大作文分析+范文(21年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2021.1.23雅思大作文原题

A recent survey shows that in many countries across the world people are generally living longer. But an increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for the society as a whole. What are the possible effects of a longer life expectancy on individuals and the society?

1月雅思写作预测命中情况

  • 1月23日小作文地图,大作文教育类,没有命中
  • 1月21日小作文饼图,大作文社会类命中
  • 1月16日小作文流程图命中,大作文教育类命中
  • 1月9日小作文柱图命中,大作文全球化类别命中

金长麟大作文解析

20201年第一次出生僻新题,同时也是过去5年没有考察的题目。本周预测只是在次重点里提醒了教育类要考察,但如此少见的题目的确始料不及。

这题不算难。既然问同意不同意,就可以说完全不同意,采取一边倒的结构。那么只要回答为什么不是一样重要就可以。

第一是不同学习阶段会侧重不同的技能学习。由于不同学习的场景,四项技能的重要性不一样,比如在针对高等教育的语言技能培养中,往往阅读和写作更加重要,因为大学和研究生乃至博士阶段对于学生的能够阅读大量晦涩的文献, 以及写作长篇学术文章两项能力要求非常高。再比如在空乘人员语言技能培养课程中,口语和听力更加重要。当然大家要记住,举例之前要简要说明原理。

第二只要写出你认为的那一个或哪一些技能更重要,以及原因就可以。

当然中规中矩的写法要讨论为什么一样重要也是可以有一段:

互补关系,学好其中一种技能,另一种也能提升。比如阅读技能好,吸收了许多词汇和表达以及思路,那么写作也可以收益。相反,一种不好,其他技能也会受影响,比如口语发音错误,听力也难以准确辨音。所以在一般语言培训和测试中四项技能都被视为同等重要。

偏锋参考范文

(可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用原段落)

In language learning, the four skills are essential to be mastered by language learners; they complement one another. But some people discuss if a priority is given to each skill, which skill is the most important one? I can't entirely agree that these four skills are equally important for learning a language.

Some people would rate listening comprehension as the most valuable language learning skill. Learners can begin hearing the language and processing it before using the other three skills - especially in a communicative class environment. And with many teaching activities, they can demonstrate their comprehension without speaking, reading, or writing.

Certain groups of linguistics also claimed that priority is mainly devoted to the speaking skill. There are many people who can speak well, but they are unable to write. Besides, there is a principle in language that a language is basically oral. The writing skill is a later skill that is learned by people when they grow older.

However, these four skills in language teaching can be divided into passive (reading and listening) and active (writing and speaking). Generally, the passive skills emerge first, and the active skills come along a little later. Therefore, the importance of one skill depends on the kind of class. In conversational L2 classes, there is very little focus on reading and writing. Additionally, if the language learner comes from an L1 with a different alphabet from the L2, it will present more signages for reading challenging writing.

In conclusion, in different learning phases, language learners should pay attention to different skills. And according to the natural process of mastering a language, listening and speaking may be more important.

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