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2020年12月19日雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2020.12.19雅思大作文原题

Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

12月雅思写作预测命中情况

  • 12月19日大小作文未命中
  • 12月12日小作文柱图命中,大作文文化类命中
  • 12月5日大作文命中原题

金长麟大作文解析

今天的考题很无语,这和12.12(上一周)的考题几乎是同一类别。上周问名人如果不是靠自身努力成名是否对青年人影响不好。今天换一个角度,说青年人是否无论明星们是否有正面形象都会崇拜他们,这一现象的利弊。

这个题目可以中立,如果崇拜名人和偶像,而这些有影响力的人带来的是正面的能量,对青年人来讲是积极作用。但盲目崇拜、拜金、模仿和跟随名人们不合适的行为,对青年人的价值观建立是有负面作用的。

可以提及和认知的是名人崇拜无可厚非:

When young, becoming fans of favorite stars is a form of escapism and a way to dull emotional pain and stress; so, emulating celebrities is a natural part of development to identify themselves with their icons. Even in adulthood, people rank successful individuals highly and model themselves after them. In a global media culture, the lifestyle promoted by stars is often unattainable to the average person, regardless of whether it is realistic or ideal.

大部分年轻人崇拜的是名人光鲜的生活和成就:

Hence, the point is that young people choose their models for reasons based on renowned excellence in a specific field rather than on scandals that happen sometimes. That is, it is to admire what is shining in famous people's career successes and not what happen to shadow their real lives.

认为崇拜名人不对可能是一种过时的想法,同时崇拜名人无法阻止:

To believe that celebrity worship is a negative development only makes out-of-date moral sense, leading to nowhere. Admiration for favorite stars cannot be avoided in this information age.

不认为会对青年人带来负面作用主要是相信粉丝自有的判断力:

Fortunately, most fans are able to learn to tell a realistic world from an ideal world during this period between no-longer children and not-yet adults, without having to refer to moral examples.

偏锋参考范文

(来自网络,可以借鉴思路观点不能使用范文原段落):

It is not uncommon to see youngsters around talking about their shared idols who are either popular actors or sports stars excitedly during spare time, in the workplace or on the subway. As far as I am concerned, admiring celebrities overly is overall a detrimental trend for the young generation and society despite several benefits it may bring about.

Admittedly, from psychological perspective, it is understandable that a certain number of young people consider star worship a form of escapism and a way to alleviate their stress from daily busy schedules. Besides, some celebrities, especially top athletes with valuable qualities including persistence and diligence set a shining example, encouraging and inspiring their fans to follow them for the purpose of sparing no effort in pursuing their dreams, which is a kind of positive spiritual belief to some extent.

However, I hold the opinion that this is generally an adverse trend owing to its unpleasant and overwhelming results influencing majority of youngsters. There is no doubt that the young could be immature and impulsive, a consequence that they are likely to imitate all the actions of their idols , irrespective of whether these actions are beneficial or not, ranging from a materialistic lifestyle, an individualistic way of living to more problematic behaviours such as racism and discrimination. These outcomes are negative not only for young people themselves but also for the society as a whole in the long term.

In conclusion, the youth are supposed to think rationally about star worship. Otherwise, the proclivity of admiring and even imitating these celebrities excessively may result in a wide range of unexpected effects and thus is a negative tendency in today's society.

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