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2020年12月5日雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

近期写作命中情况

  • 12月5日大作文政府投资管理类完全命中
  • 12月3日没有命中;小作文表格联考,大作文教育类
  • 11月28日小作文线图表格命中
  • 11月28日大作文政府管理类命中
  • 11月21日小作文饼图命中
  • 11月21日大作文教育类命中
  • 11月14日小作文线图命中
  • 11月14日大作文环境类命中
  • 11月12日没有命中
  • 11月7日小作文柱图表格组合,预测课上特别分析了柱图的核心写法

2020.12.5雅思大作文原题

More government investment should be on the teaching of science than any other subjects in order to keep a country's development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

金长麟(20年雅思写作名师)雅思大作文解析

今天的题目又是老题重现,2011年11约5号的原题。由此可见复习之前老题的机经非常重要!本周预测小范围精讲课我专门讲解了政府投资原理和国家进步的标准原则,命中!

这个题目很多不同考察版本,常见的有:Since money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people think financial support from the government should be provided for scientific research only provided for scientific research rather than for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

明显可以看到之前的考察在写清楚政府为什么要投入科技教研后还要写其他科目获得政府资金的必要性。但是今天的题目却非必要,只要回答政府投资科技教研对国家建设和发展的重要性来证明投入的合理性即可,不写反方也能给分(前提是篇幅足够)!如果要拓展篇幅,就可以写反方说国家的进步发展其他科目也重要,为什么重要,所以国家也应当投入!

国家投入科研主要是因为科技是生产力推动社会发展进步:

To begin with, there is no doubt that science drives the national economy since most modern industries, such as robotics and telecommunications, are based on high technology. Moreover, the process is cumulative, as when the companies turn the results of their research and development into successful products, the profits fund further investigations. Consequently, the whole nation benefits from high-tech manufacturing, which provides jobs and boosts incomes, thereby improving living standards.

国家如果要进步,投入其他科目,主要是因为国家的进步不仅仅是生产发展,而是综合传承。同时其他科目也能给公民更完备的教育体系:

On the other hand, however, arts and humanities should not be excluded from academic investigation since history, literature, and law represent and define the nation. Furthermore, the evolution of human civilization has been the result of science and culture. Therefore, all areas of knowledge are equally important. Hence, non-scientific research is necessary to support the education system in giving children a complete and balanced foundation regardless of their eventual careers.

(以上两段是华东区资深考官范文,注意看框架结构的组织)

当然反方也可以借鉴我课上的讲解说国家进步除了科技还有很多其他如经济、法制、环境等,所以不仅仅要投入科技教研,发展相关课程的投入和推广也很重要!

偏锋参考范文

(来自网络,可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用范文原段)

People have different views on the subjects that the government should invest in and prioritize to achieve what is termed economic development. Some believe that a larger portion of government funds should be dedicated to teaching science-related. In my opinion, although science plays a large role, other subjects hold merit in their own right in contributing to, and in driving, economic progress and, therefore, deserve equal government investment and funding.

On the one hand, public funding in science education subjects is essential in driving a country's development in many areas, such as engineering and medicine. An increasing number of developed countries such as Japan have emphasized the science education of their citizens. This intense focus has led to science learning, knowledge, and scientific research achievement, fostering innovation, and increasing productivity, contributing to the nation's national economic growth. Therefore, investment in the teaching of science education is crucial for a country's economic progress.

On the other hand, the management of a nation also determines its development and economic progress. As such, it can be argued that curriculum subjects such as social sciences and law require as much attention and investment. Developing economies such as Indonesia and Cambodia have long experienced political and social unrests and conflicts. It can largely be attributed to instability and poor management of legal, social, and governmental systems. This is in contrast to their Asian counterparts such as Singapore and Korea, where well-established and stable civil law and political institutions can be observed.

In conclusion, subjects related to the management of a nation's economy, such as social sciences, have as much impact and significance on one's nation's development and progress and deserve as much government investment as science subjects.

01 【金老师作文命中率

金老师雅思教学20年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了

每一场雅思考试,金长麟都会为同学们做的写作预测,不是市面上其他老师给你的大范围的预测,我们的预测题库一般在5个左右!!!

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