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2020年12月3日雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

近期写作命中情况

  • 11月28日小作文线图表格命中
  • 11月28日大作文政府管理类命中
  • 11月21日小作文饼图命中
  • 11月21日大作文教育类命中
  • 11月14日小作文线图命中
  • 11月14日大作文环境类命中
  • 11月12日没有命中
  • 11月7日小作文柱图表格组合,预测课上特别分析了柱图的核心写法
  • 12月3日没有命中,小作文延续上周表格联考;大作文继11.21考试后教育类再次出现

2020.12.3雅思大作文原题

Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, while others believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

金长麟(20年雅思写作名师)雅思大作文解析

今天这个题目是教育类别的老题,骨灰级的一个题目。11月21号又考了教育类别的题目,以为近期不会再出,但是没有想到雅思的出题顺序有一点黔驴技穷,才短短两周又再一次出现了这样的类别。

这个题目原则上来说不难,正方讨论年轻人为什么要遵循传统,其实常规的写法或者说雅思考官能够快速接受的逻辑就是:年轻人遵循传统是对传统的一种继承发扬。

同时所谓不以规矩,不成方圆,传统既然有祖先的智慧,它就有可以规范我们行为的点,而且年轻人遵循传统之后也更容易与父母甚至与祖父母交流,某种程度上可以去缩小家庭当中的代沟,减少矛盾。

至于年轻人为什么要活成自己的样子,那么站在不遵守传统这个点上来看,我们可以提出是因为传统有很多已经过时,不适合现在的时代,也可能甚至是不正确的,所以不法古我们不能盲目的去遵从老祖宗设定的各种规则。

而站在年轻人的本身,他们会有很多个性化的思想和全新的想法,遵循传统,有可能会扼杀这种创新,这对整个社会以及年轻人这一代的发展有可能是不利的。

鼓励遵循

There is no doubt that it is significant for the youth to follow their social traditions.

Initially, it is of substantial importance to regulate their behavior and thus smooth the communication between the young and their parents, so that the generation gap, which frequently occurs in a wide range of families, would be less likely generated.

Subsequently, it is a commonly shared convention that social traditions are considered as the characteristics of a nation. The heritage of those characteristics would largely ensure a country’s cultural diversity. However, if young people do not follow their social traditions, the integrity of their culture will suffer from a considerable loss.

鼓励个性

However, although it seems to be beneficial for the youth to behave within the confines of their social traditions, we should not neglect the blessings to which allowing them to behave freely will contribute. They tend to be rather restricted because of the pressure stemmed from the tradition of their community and consequently there is a higher possibility for them to become less creative in areas, where innovation is highly demanded, including advertising industry. By contrast, if they are allowed to behave as they wish to, young people are more likely to become innovative. As a result of this, they may fully stretch their potential, thereby contributing as much as they could to the fields they are specialized in.

偏锋参考范文

(来自网络,可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用范文原段)

范文较长,更多是一种素材和论证想法的整理

Every generation, young and old, should be allowed freedom to deal with the breaking down of certain patterns and standards being handed down from the past. As individuals, young people are particularly keen to the need to end whatever tradition they think is unreasonable for the society. All rebellious minds think alike--tradition is a guide for the past but not a jailer for the future.

Too often young men and women are enthusiastic about the evolution of beliefs and practices of their society, and their behaviors tend to challenge a number of elements of tradition. For that matter, mental independence is required because without an amount of freedom, tradition would be only an explanation for acting in conformity without thinking independently.

Accordingly, young people ought not to be forced to express their new feelings in a mummified form, otherwise the evolution in tradition could not happen. The point is that not just because something is traditional, so there is reason enough to do it. It is good, however, for young people to continue a worthwhile tradition, and it is also good not to be captive of an unreasonable tradition which is not worth having. Although social bondage persists, it makes a difference if young people are permitted to think and act in such a way as different from that of a conservative mind in which the word 'tradition' means a shortcut to thinking or an excuse for acting.

Probably a society can only successfully function with traditional values, diverse customs, thoughts, lifestyles, religion, music, dance, arts and languages, among other things of culture. Young people had better learn that modern traditions are built on the past just as the past was built on the times that went before it. Traditions bring continuity to one's existence in a society, even though this sort of continuity is precisely what has been increasingly lost through modernity.

Thus, it behooves young individuals to preserve their traditions of value by safeguarding against the negative influence from various factors such as industrialization, globalization, and assimilation or marginalization of special cultural groups. It certainly makes patriotic sense that young people's love for traditions worth continuing always strengthens the well-being of the society and never weakens all that is meant to identify themselves with their country. Good tradition being a good guide, young people, however rebellious, should not be entirely negative about the past with all its enduring heritages and necessary evils.

In conclusion, since a modern society is not supposed to be a dead community, young people may behave freely in treating tradition as the living faith of the dead and not as the dead faith of the living. They should not believe in traditions simply because many beliefs and practices have been handed down for many generations, but should instead observe and analyze anything that agrees with reason and is conductive to the good and benefit of the society. It takes a lot of history to make a tradition, so the best of which must be accepted and lived up to, from generation to generation.

01 【金老师作文命中率

金老师雅思教学20年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了

每一场雅思考试,金长麟都会为同学们做的写作预测,不是市面上其他老师给你的大范围的预测,我们的预测题库一般在5个左右!!!

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