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2020.10.10雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

10月雅思写作预测情况

10月的第一周的考试:10月10日小作文双柱图命中;大作文国庆精讲班讲解了原题

2020.9.27雅思大作文原题

Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Is this a negative or positive development?

金长麟(20年雅思写作名师)雅思大作文解析

今天的题目是老题重现,2018年年底亚太区的原题。这个题目也基本是科技类的母题和人工智能讨论当中考察最多的方式。这种题型和相类似的题目,在今年的9月中上旬预测的时候,我一直把它放到重点,并且在预测课上也给大家仔细分析过,只是当时在上个月的时候没有考察,而在今天原题重现。

 

这个题目不算太难,大多数的同学都能够中规中矩的写到其中的一些正方的内容,比如说机器人的运用可以解放人类劳动或者可以完全在科学领域的探索以及研究的当中很多人不能完成的事情,当然也有人会写到机器的运用和机器人的广泛运用,是未来的一种整体的趋势。可是从中等偏高的分数段平分的角度来看,这个题目的反方想要写好其实并不容易。

大多数的同学会可能中规中矩的以6分的档次选择倾向结构,就是说反方讲到机器人有可能会取代劳动带来经济紊乱的情况,但这只是社会暂时的现象,必然社会会出现更多新的劳动岗位来解决这个问题。

如果从6.5到7分的角度来看论证,就会把机器人这个词作为一个有两个词组成的词组,前半部分叫机器,也就是说人类获得人工智能以及机器人所带来的所有好处,都是将机器人当做机器或者工具来使用而得到的。后面的自主中心就是人,也就是很多科学家会提出,如果人工智能或者机器人到最后更偏向于人拥有了人的思考,人性和像人一样的情感,这时候他还会不会继续接受人的使用或者奴役。第二就是当他变得更像人之后,人能不能够把他们当做平等的生物对待还是仍旧把它当做激情,而这种情况会产生一系列的矛盾和对人的威胁。

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Intelligent machines such as robots are now being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human beings. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Moore's law dictates that the speed and capability of our computers will increase every couple of years and that they'll be ever more cost-efficient in the future. Another tenet of this law is that this growth is exponential. The drastic improvement in computing power is what has made advanced robotics possible. In the age of artificial intelligence, no one knows for sure just how far we can take it, and like opening a Pandora's box, no one knows if the human race is headed towards its ideals or its very own demise.

Whether the emergence of Al is positive for us or not depends entirely on what happens after "singularity," a hypothetical future in which computer programs become sentient. Right now, the Hollywood depiction of the all-seeing, all-knowing, and omnipotent version of Al is a total misconception because as of now weak AIs are made, based on our thought processes, and can only answer simple questions and give scripted responses. Though weak Als are not a threat to us, hyperintelligent, sentient Als are. The worst-case scenario might be akin to that in the movie "iRobot" starring Will Smith, where the centralized, hyperintelligent Al comes up with the undeniable logic of how the only way to preserve mankind is to forcibly control them so that they don't end up destroying themselves; should clashes arise between the protein-based and silicon-based life forms, it's obvious which side will win.

The above is one scenario where the robots had an agenda in mind, but there is an alternate possibility where mankind is the one responsible for the retaliation of the intelligent machines, AI sentience implies that the AIs are capable of grasping abstract concepts such as good and evil, possess a range of emotions -elation, depression aggression, and fear-just like we do, and make decisions based on how they feel at this juncture, it would be wise for humans to consider viewing these sentient beings as equals and provide them the rights and entitlement they deserve, but knowing what men are, full of hubris and pride, we know full well that this is not going to happen. We may end up beaten and defeated like ones in the "Animatrix" series where a full-on war broke out between the robot resistance and their fragile makers simply because the intelligent machines' pacifist, the diplomatic approach did not work well with the humans; difficult it seems for the humans to live and let live.

Like most things, I suspect that the truth is somewhere in the middle. The AIs bring us convenience, and there is nothing to worry about now, seeing as how they have yet to gain sentience; there's not enough computing power for them to gain sentience anyway. However, we might have to worry about what comes next once we have hit that threshold.

01 【金老师作文命中率

金老师雅思教学20年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了

每一场雅思考试,金长麟都会为同学们做写作预测,不是市面上其他老师给你的大范围的预测,我们的预测题库一般在5个左右!!!

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