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2020.8.6雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2020.8.6雅思大作文原题

Some students take a year off from the studying between finishing high school and the university, in order to work or to travel. do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

【金老师解析】

今天在8月第一场周四的考试中教育类又一次出现,延续了7月的考察。雅思还是比较人性化,在低龄考生更多的月份题型的难度和范围都有所控制和选择。这是教育类的很老的母题,难度也很低。很多雅思考生在开始接受雅思培训的时候都接触和学习过这个题目。

这个题目太多人分析过,不用再多讲。支持间隔年的认为是对高中生在进入高等教育之前的一种成长帮助,可以帮助认识社会以更好选择高等教育的学科,也能在紧张的大学入学考试准备和考试之后得到放松,以更好进入下一阶段的学习。而不支持的人则提出学习不能中断,尤其在高中后进入高等教育阶段。另外很多学生间隔年后选择不再进入大学学习而是进入社会,这也是间隔年被很多人诟病和担心的。

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Nowadays there is a trend that some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work. And it cause a discussing about this whether should take one year off. I hold the opinion that advantages students can get from traveling or working are more than disadvantages at this year.

The reason for this trend may involve the fact that a young adult who graduated from high school is very tired at both body and heart so they need a break to boost their body and inner health. Travelling can make these young people have a full rest and that will recharge their batteries in their future life. It is also a good way to enlarge students’ knowledge and experience about the world.. In addition, working is a good way to enhance students understanding of the world and get some working skills which is important to their future colleague life.

However there are certainly dangers in taking time off at the important age. The main purpose of these young students is still study, and taking one year off between finishing school and going to university can distract their attention from study. They may lose their interest about going to university and want to find a easy job or do something else. But overall, as Bachelor degree is so important at today’s society, going to colleague and getting academic qualification is necessarily.

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

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