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2020.7.31雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

2020年7月31日,今日大作文教育类再次考察!
 
教育、政府、环境是金老师7月5号一开始做整月分析的时候提醒的三大类,这几周不断在考,总体7月没有超出范围,难度也中规中矩。
 
很多纠结于复习什么和预测什么时候出的同学,快来领取15-19年的大作文机经,这么多原题频繁出现,还不打动你吗!
今天更是超简单,教育类里面的万年老题,也是2017年8月26号原题。
 
2020.7.31雅思大作文原题:
Full-time university students should spend a lot of time in studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
 
【金老师解析】
教育类再次考察!教育、政府、环境是我7月5号一开始做整月分析的时候提醒的三大类,这几周不断在考,总体7月没有超出范围,难度也中规中矩。今天更是超简单,教育类里面的万年老题,也是2017年8月26号原题。很多纠结于复习什么和预测什么时候出的同学,快来领取15-19年的大作文机经,这么多原题频繁出现,还不打动你吗!
 
这个题目无论第一段写不写全日制大学生应该努力学习都不跑题。题目的核心在but后面,讨论全日制大学生是否应该参加学习以外活动。中立结构可以,一段写应该参加和参加好处,一段写参加会带来对学习的影响。倾向结构也可以,在写对学习影响后让步反驳。一边倒结构也给分,完全赞同,写各种参加课外活动的好处和有点。这真是一个可甜可咸的题目!
2020.7.16预测命中截图
 
 
参考范文:(范文来自网络可以借鉴观点和论证通路不能使用原词句)
Nowadays, college students tend to spare more time and energy on their academic study and at the same time lay less emphasis on some extracurricular activities. From my point of view, this is a positive trend.
 
Firstly, as human beings have entered an era of knowledge-based economy, the more college students learn, the better they prepare for the future. The specialized knowledge they learn in university will play a key role in their future career. For instance, for a student majoring in medical science, if he does not apply himself to his major, he will meet a number of problems during the treatment and consequently, it is unlikely for him to become a prestigious doctor in the future. By contrast, regarding to students excellent academic attainment, they are more popular in the workplace since their conspicuous transcript is proof of not only their hard work but also their potential in learning, which is extremely significant for future work.
 
On the other hand, excellent school performance is far from enough for university graduates, considering the increasingly competitive job market. The situation in real tasks has become more and more complicated, which is difficult for graduates to handle if they are weak in other abilities. In this case, taking part in some activities during college is a perfect approach for them to understand the complexity in real work and to enhance capacities like communication skills, teamwork spirit and leadership ability. Students engaging in activities tend to have an edge over others who only concentrate on study and they are more likely to find decent jobs after graduation.
 
In conclusion, I believe in order to become well-rounded individuals, academic study is needed but participating in some extracurricular activities cannot be ignored.
 

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